Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Kanmani in manasukul

unai kandene mudhal murai nan enai tholaithene mutrilumaai, khaadhal boodhame, acham vardhe, haiyo haiyayo

Uma :Sollu da pudhu maaplai. Epadi iruka unoda pondati?

Prem :Avaluku ena ena katikita la maharaasiya dhan iruka. Adu seri adu ena di unoda caller tune? Evana kanda? Its too late dear now, enaku erkanave kalyanam ayiduchu.

Uma : Ada thu, alayadhe. Unakaga inda paatu vekara alavuku en taste onum avalo kevalama pogala. Na ena Priyava, vaazhkai thaiygam panna. En aaluku pidicha paatu adhan vechurken.

Prem : Seri di overa pesadhe. Sayangalam ena pandra?

Uma : Oh Arvind beach ku pogalamanu ketan, adhan avanoda call kaga waiting. Ena da matter?

Prem : Oho seri. Meet you at 5.30. Barista ku vandudhu. Figure vanda odane friend cut panadhe di. Aan paavam polladhu!

Uma : Err.. dei Arvind keta na ena solluven? Avan already kadupula irukanda.. nanga velela poi oru vaaram mela aachu.

Prem : Nee aachu un aalu aachu. Dont give me excuses. Im very busy you see. Seri correcta timeku vandru. As usual late aakadhe.

Uma : Adinga! yaru da epavum latea varuva?

Prem : Seriiiiiiii, tata...
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Uma : Ada paavi ipo Arvind keta ena solluven!?!

Enavale adi enavale, endhan idhayathai tholaithu vitten..

Uma : Kavala padadhe chellam, adha eduthu na badrama vechurken (with all smiles on her face)

Arvind : Hey pondatti! Sollu ena matter? Sorry di chellam, sayangalam meet pandradhu kashtamnu nenaikaren, shall I compensate it for a dinner?

Uma : Hmm edho po, epo paaru unoda velaye katindu azhu. Apo na eduku unaku? Cha inda pasangale ipadi than. Ok nu solra varaikum pinadi lo lo nu alaivanunga, Serinu soliyachuna porum, apram kandukave maatanga.

Arvind : Oi sorry di honey. Pls purinjuko. Project deadlines, manager kadangaran kazhutharakaran oru manushan evalo velai dhan pakradhu sollu. Amam btw inda pasangale va? Ena di plural la pesare

Uma : Aya budhi pogudhu paaru. Un othruthana vechu samalikaradhe inga perum paada iruku, idula una madri inuna. Kashtam!

Arvind : Seri sollu ena matter? Y the calling?

Uma : Idu ena anyayama iruku? Oruthi ava aaluku call pandrathuku kudava oru saaku venum. Seri eduku kuptenna, sayangalam meet pandradhu kashtamnu solalamnu dhan..hehe adukulyum neye plan change panita. Prem call panirndhan da, edho mukyamana matter pola iruku. Ne kuptanu soliyum meet pananumnu sonnan. So na avan poi 5.30ku Baristala pathutu wait pandren. You join us at around 7.30 angedhu namba dinner pogalaam. Okva?

Arvind : Adi paavi kedi. Idukudan avalo periya dialogue adichiyaa inda pasangale ipadi dhan nu? Cha inda ponnungale ipadi than pa. Summa eduku eduthalaum scene poduvanga!

Uma : Seri seri overa pesadhe. Sayangalam vandhu seru. 7.30 paarkalaam.

Arvind : Okay sweetheart! ummma

5.25pm - Barista

Uma : Hey ena da adisayam. Mazhai dhan kota pogudhu. Epadi ne ivalo sekaram?

Prem :Solren di. Okaru. Ena sapadra? I have ordered for a cafe mocha. Unaku ena venum?

Uma : Hey ena da you sound so low? Edachum prechanaya? Priya edachum sonala? Illa ne edachum avaloda sandai potiyaa?

Prem : Solren Uma. Wait lemme first order some drinks for you

Uma : Drink brink lam apram irukatum da. I jus had a cup of tea at home. Ne sollu.

Prem : Hmm enadi solradu. You know about my relationship with Divya isnt it? Adhan di ava nyabagamave iruku.

Uma : Dei inga paaru. Divya is a history. She isnt worth you da. Na Priya oda pazhagina matum solren. Priya is a very sweet girl da. Una pathi romba nala purinju vechurka. Priya knows what compromise is, and she loves you a lot.

Prem : Yeah, adu theriyudhu di. But she gets upset for silly things. Na oru naal latea vanda odane okandu azhara and she asks me if I dont love her

Uma : Hey thats very common da. Avalayum ne konajam purinjuka try pannu. She might feel insecured isnt it? Adu naaladhan. Dei vitu kuduthu poda. Konja naal. Apram elam seriya poidum.

Prem : Life is a pain di.

Uma : Ada paavi. Ena da thuravan madri pesare.

Barista guy : Sir, your mocha!
Prem : Thanks! one more pls..

Prem : Hmm sollu di. Thuravan illa. But adikadi engaluku kula ipo sandai varudhu. Ava ana amma and appa kita lam romba paasama iruka. Divya vandrunda kuda ivalo alavuku enga amma appava gavanichirundrupalangradhu sandhegamdhan

Uma : Hey paaru, she is a nice girl da. Seri unkita solren. She spoke to me few days back. Romba azhuda da. I said elam seriya poidumnu. She is very matured da. You know what she told me how a girl should behave to her husband to lead a peaceful life. Sonna aachirya paduva. But you know what she said

Priya : Uma, nenga dhan Prem oda best friend aache, why dont you help me. Avaruku ena pidikalayaa? He doesnt even speak to me properly. Mugam paathukuda pesa maatengraru

Uma : Priya, avan konjam shy type ma. Ne kavala padadhe. He loves you a lot. Ipo laam avan fulla una pathi dhan pesikite irukan. Might be he is bit busy with his work and must be pissed off due to that. Na avankita pesaren, ne kavala padadhe.

Priya : Yes Uma, thanks a ton. I know love cant be earned by compulsion or by recommendation. Avara na eduvume solradhu kadayadhu. Even avar slighta thani adicha kuda na onume sola maaten. Atleast enaku therinju pandrar. Na edachum sonena he might do it without my knowledge, but ena use. Theva illama verupu dhan varum.

Uma : hmm

Priya : Avaruku ena pidikumdradhu paathu seriyaradhu dhane enoda velai. Na vitu kuduka ready, but avarku ena pidikumdradhe enkita solamaatengrapo dhan Uma i feel dejected. Avar amma appa are like my parents too. Avanga ellam enkita romba paasamadhan irukanga. Irundalum, na yaarukaga inga vandruken? Ivar kagadhane. Ada matum ivar en purinjuka maatengraru?

Uma : Ne kavala padadhe Priya. Na avana redu thatu thati vekaren. He would become normal soon. Why dont you come home for lunch sometime with Prem? Na samaika maaten..hehe enga amma dhan samaipanga. So bayapadaama varalaam.

Priya : Hahah so sweet of you Uma. Sure I will come. Avara kutindu vara sollunga. Okay then see you sometime. Do keep in touch. Bbye

Uma : Paaru da. Ava una evalo purinju vechurkalo ne avala ignore pandra. Love should be mutual Prem. Pazhaya kadai is past. No use thinking about it. I suggest you tell Priya about Divya and tell her the truth that it is taking sometime for you to forget Divya and to take her memories out of your mind. Priya is educated, a understanding and caring girl. She would definitely help you out.

Arvind : Excuse me officers. Nangalum join panikalaama?

Prem : Hey Arvind. Va da machan. Paavam da ne. Epadidhan idhoda kudumbam nadatha poriyo. Unan nenachale manasuku kashtama irukuda

Arvind : Hmm en kashtam unkau theriyudhu. Ena pandradhu. Atleast ena paath paridava pada ne oruthan irukaye nanba. Mikka sandhosam

Uma : Dei enangada rendu perum overa aadarenga? Arvind vendam, avanuku ena solitu poiduvan. Na maatenu solitu ponena una oru ponnukuda thirumbi paaka maata. Edho na dhan pona poradhunu una katika samadhichurken, so jaagaradhaya pesu.

Arvind : haha sorry di en rasathi. Ena manadu elam mudinjudha? Ena pudu maaplai, kalyana vaazhkai lam epadi poghudhu?

Prem : Wonderful da. Im lucky to have got Priya as my wife :). Ena solra Uma?

Uma : Hmm true.

Arvind : Prem, would you mind joining us for dinner?

Prem : Siva poojai la na eduku machan karadi madri? Erkanave ungaloda beach plana keduthutennu Uma ena thitadha kora, you have fun machan. Na veetuku kalambaren. Priya enakaga sapadama wait panitu irupa.

Arvind : Adhane paathen. Pondati kaiyala sapada porenu solitu poyen. Aduku eduku siva poojai adu idunu verupethara..? Have fun da maaplai. Enjoi pannu. Sekarame Shreya ku oru nalla anna na pethu kudukara vazhiya paaru.


Uma : yaaruda Shreya?

Arvind : hehe kalli eduvume theriyadha maadri kekara. Namba ponnu dhan di ;)

Uma : Ada paavi!?!?!?!

23 comments:

Raz said...

me first me first! :D

he he ! sorry romba vazhiyuren!

super cute reeee...

eppadi eppadi ippadi ellam ? mmmm???
kalakite... nice meaning.. nice story..

Heidi Kris said...

hehe thanks thanks.

Unknown said...

cho chweet...

Arunprasad Durairaj said...

aiooo .. engirunthunga ungalukkelam ivalo azhaha inspiration kedaikuthu ..elutha mudiyuthu :( .. koncham vikraman story sayal iruku ... ;) .. nalla kathai ... but bery bery good narration :)

Sat said...

Royally cute!
kalakureenga?! :D
appadiye oru kutti romantic comedy patha effect...and cool style of writing...
And indha caller tune concept nalla irukke
BTW...happy new year!

gils said...

:( enakkau katheye purila

Heidi Kris said...

@ Harish, Sat and Prasad :"> nandrigal pala

@ Gils :( kadai enana oruthan oru ponna love pandran, but vera oruthiya kalyanam panikaran. And he is not able to cope up with the new girl, but his wife is so understanding and caring. So kadhai oda karuthu, namba love pandravangala vida nambala love pandravangala namba purinjundomna vaazhkai romba sandhoshama irukumngradhu .. adu konjam sodhapiten pola.. manithu vidavum

Padma said...

ha ha. sri.. really superb:).. the best part i like is the friendship of uma and prem:)..

Ram said...

So kadhai oda karuthu, namba love pandravangala vida nambala love pandravangala namba purinjundomna vaazhkai romba sandhoshama irukum

aahaa! aRpudhamaana karuththu, aazhndha sindhanai! yaar angae? aayiram poRkaasugaLai koNdu vaarungaL :P

nandoo said...

:D nice one..

naan enna solren... apdiye.. lighttaaa divya vaiyum correct panna... ore kalllulla rendu maangaa :P epdi..

namba love panravangalayum.. vitra koodathu..
nambala lvoe pandravangaluyum vitra koodathu...

ithu epdi irukku .. itha vitutu.. umma kitta vanthu advice kekraan.. stupid fellow.. :P

nandoo said...

tht caller tune concept..

Sir, your mocha!
Thanks! one more pls

Shreyaa thing..

liked all this very much.... good job!

Heidi Kris said...

@ Padma :-)
@ Ram - Mikka nandri arase ;) :P
@ Nandoo - Ada paavi! adunaladhan character peru Nandoo ku badhila Prem nu poten :P ;) and hehe nandri :D

Thrivikraman said...

hey sri, super kathai di, epdi epdi ? ana indha kadhai lam pakarchey konjam.. Deja Vu! :p

gils said...

!!!chancela ponga..me lifting two hands for nandoos view :D

gils said...

1 suggestion...dialoguku munnadi or at the end yaar pesaraanganu anga anga poteengana puniyaama pogum :)

Heidi Kris said...

@ Parth - Thanks
@ Gils - Done :)

Sat said...

Hey....you didnt have to colour code it...we can very well make out who's speaking what
as for people on a high 24/7...er can't help

Ram said...

yeah...munnaadi it was very clear. already un tanglish-a padikardhu perumpaadu, idhula color la verayaa? buss dhaan :P

Heidi Kris said...

@ Sat oh will change it..

Dei ram, en tanglish ku ena da korachal :-(

Ram said...

'ena' is 'what' to you. 'enna' is 'what' to the rest of the tanglish world :P

that's just one instance :P

Prasanna said...

story is very nice... very romantic etc etc...

but, un ezhutthil pizhai irukkiradhu!!

"Prem :Avaluku ena ena katikita la maharaasiya dhan iruka. Adu seri adu ena di unoda caller tune?"

how can he hear her caller tune if he called her on the fone?? :P or is this some hi-fi technology in india??

Ram said...

PV- i think it is! i kina remember people telling me about this. adhaan naan mookka nozhaikkala. but why should i worry if u r reading the story =))

Dainty Damsel said...

Hey well written dialogues:).Your original stuff?nce anyways :)
Had fun reading it konjam tamil contexts English lai padika kashthapattein

climax seriya purilai :(