On the road, on a full moon day
he was walking, follwed by his shadow in grey
Knowing that he became the prey
For he believed whatever she had to say
Had she left a trace or ray
Which could have made him live in a way
On the shore of the bay
where she ditched him and went astray!
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2 comments:
'Had she left..'
The ditty seems incomplete..
Wouldn't it be better if the above two lines were a question?
Or if it conveys a desire that she might have done otherwise,the poem needs two more lines..
anyways,it's the liberty of a poet..
U do keep up ur writing,Sri..:)
Intha ponnungale ipdi thaan. :P
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